Wednesday 26 February 2014

Laura's 100 word challenge





The man pulled himself out of the paper slowly flicking his long hair to the side. He stood up on his thin legs and all of a sudden ran off to the edge of the table. He climbed down the table leg until he reached the soft blue carpet. Then sprinted across the room and slid under the wooden door. He appeared in a huge hallway and came face to face with a big Labrador. As soon as the Labrador saw him he gobbled him up in one bite.


2 comments:

  1. well done Laura great description:)

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  2. We liked how you used great description and how you didn't tell the reader that the main
    character was smaller than the labrador. Great story. Well done,
    Em and Lib Malvern Parish!

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